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I Try So Hard
Author: KitKatrina

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Iíve spent my whole life, along with you,
I understand the worth, it takes two,
Our time is precious, our time is pure,
My love is certain, thatís for sure,
But I try so hard and it doesnít work,
Iíll be your friend for what itís worth...

My life is worthless, without you here,
My heart is empty, without you dear,
My mind is gone now, where did it go?
And you are gone now, and it is so,
But I try so hard and it doesnít work,
Iíll be your friend for what itís worth...

My eyes are empty, canít shed a tear,
My feelings gone now, but are you here?
Iíll let you go now, and Iíll move on,
Donít say itís my fault, you were gone,
But I try so hard and it doesnít work,
Iíll be your friend for what itís worth...

------- Author's Notes -------

This poem was actually a song I wrote. Since I can't sing it for you, you can read it! I feel very proud of this poem and I know it was all from the heart, that's the best kind! God bless

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (71.37.156.96) -- Monday, February 6 2006, 06:04 pm

Fellings

I enjoyed this read, and can feel the emotions / song within them. After love has gone it can be hard to return 'Just Friends' but it is always worth it to be a friend Nice words thank you for sharing your soul.
KitKatrina (68.189.34.19) -- Tuesday, February 7 2006, 02:43 am

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Wow you hit that right on the money with your comment. Sometimes I feel what I write doesn't make sense but I'm glad it finally did...Thanks for the comment!
 
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