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A Place I Used To Go
Author: Seizure

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This place in my vision seems surreal, it is bright
Everything's in place and damn does it feel right
The wind creaks the trees, and blows around the leaves
A place I used to go, where no one ever grieves
Running water's heard, birds chirp all above
I think this place is perfect, I think that I'm in love
This is where I'll live, to live in peace again
Something keeps pain out, while letting this joy in

I hate having to leave, I want to stay forever
This place is good to me, I could never hurt it ever
The way the sun breaks, through the darkest cloud
And fades away the thunder, no matter how strong and loud
Makes me realize, there's something more to life
Then troubles in this world, and fearing for your strife
I must leave now, but I swear I will return
I've so much more to study, I've so much more to learn

It's been several years, but I finally made it back
What used to be so bright is burned and faded black
No life is in sight, the water has run dry
Just old and messy garbage is filling up the sky
The Sun is blocked out, by this smog and this waste
Cold wind makes me freeze, I lost my sense of taste
What all happened here? I really couldn't know
My mind's all that's left, of the place I used to go

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (67.160.237.11) -- Wednesday, February 15 2006, 11:51 pm

this place you used to go...

Ive been to a similar place. and i know how you feel about being there. this poem is absolutly amazing. thank you. Much love
FAO (152.163.100.5) -- Thursday, February 23 2006, 06:08 pm

Outstanding

We've all had experiences in our lives like that, and whether it was something tangible or emotional, to have it be gone or so completely changed is bizarre and makes you almost question your sanity. Great Write. Thanks for sharing the thought.
Babygurl (69.21.20.118) -- Wednesday, March 29 2006, 07:20 am

wow

It's been a while since I've been on this site and your writings are still some of my favorites.
Seizure (134.78.110.18) -- Tuesday, April 11 2006, 06:14 pm

birthday...

Thanks for the feedback everyone... And thanks for giving me a compliment on my birthday Babygurl!
Hi (209.7.107.51) -- Friday, March 9 2007, 04:46 pm

Can i

Can i use your poem
 
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