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Sometimes, We Just Need A Moment, Alone
Author: ShyHeart

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She stood beside the sea as the tide came drifting in, pushing white, Summer
Clouds toward her lovely dreams. She just smiled, as the rocks turned the
Summer White into a spray of tears, they cried all over her, rainbows filled her
Very, soul. Tiny hands reached up, felt the smile upon the moon, as stars
Danced on her finger tips

Sometimes, We Just Need A Moment, Alone

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Terrie* (66.81.138.30) -- Friday, February 17 2006, 09:32 pm

Just one moment alone fulfills

As ever this is truely the very beart of a heart that feels True Love "Deeply" Beautiful absolutely beautiful..Captures your readers Hearts as well as mine ..Truely Divine
avenger (64.34.174.104) -- Tuesday, February 21 2006, 05:51 pm

sorry

didnt understand this. the grammar is not right. hard to read. dont take this as an insult.
 
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