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Worth The Risk
Author: FoRsAkEn

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a million wishes that can never come true
now a million and one..since i cant be with you
ours firsts can't be forgotten i dont disagree
but i thought you'd be over him enough to be with me
deep down i knew the truth but i didnt care
all that mattered was you were always there
to make me smile..make me forget
but i got to reliant, which i now regret
you cant always be around just because i want you to be
you whole world does not can not revolve around me
i dont blame or hate you in any way
i still love you more with each day
i didnt fall in love with you..i chose to be
nor was i forced to...it was all me
i wont forget what we've shared and promised to do
especially my promise to always be there for you
if we're meant to be then we will
if not then i love you still
for what you've done i cant thank you enough
for pushing me to go through with alot of stuff
no matter what..still know this
i still think your worth the risk

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Comments on this poem/writing:

MC (64.12.116.5) -- Friday, March 3 2006, 03:40 am

I LOVE this poem

What a lovely sentiment....this person is so lucky to have your friendship and love. Many blessings to you.
XX (64.139.227.36) -- Thursday, March 16 2006, 04:55 pm

its great

great use of words
reject (24.237.39.7) -- Tuesday, April 25 2006, 04:08 am

Move along...

"When all you got to keep is strong, move along, move along like i know you do. And even when your hope is gone, move along, move along, just to make it through."

You're obviously progressing in your writing. I like this one.
 
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