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Hope
19 April, 2003
Author: Angelina

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I hope you're happy with her.
I'm happy for you.
We all hope that hope will someday come through.
Hoping is all that I've done for you.
But you killed hope.

I want you to want her but I want you too.
We all want to want,
but want will never do.
Wanding is all that I've done of you.
But you killed want.

I need you to need me the way I need you.
But needing is needy and you swear she needs you.
Needing is all that I've done of you.
But you killed need.

You kill me when you look at her.
She kills me when she looks at you.
killing is as killing do.
So I killed both of you..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (205.188.209.108) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 02:02 pm

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Excellent! I really like this....good writing Angelina!
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 06:15 pm

wow

Nice job! I like this poem!
luc (68.74.155.162) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 02:30 am

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double homicide.. hehe.. good job.. on the poem i mean.. o.O
 
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