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Wondering
Author: Catyrose

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I wonder what you’re thinking
As you go upon your merry way
The consequences of your actions
Will affect you one frosty December day

Out of touch with reality
Playing with a life that is not your own
Bringing one more child into a house, not a home

I wonder what you’re thinking
Will you love and guide this precious little life
When you have chosen to live
With the creator of chaos, pain and strife

Living in a dream world
Bound to become a nightmare
You dismiss all reason without a care

I wonder what you’re thinking
As you plan the days ahead
Denying an ever present
Underlying sense of dread

A few short months from now
As you gaze upon this little one’s face
I certainly hope the seed-bearer
Doesn’t disappear without a trace

Or worse yet stay behind
And make your life a living hell
Adding more chapters to your book of life
Such a sad story you will have to tell

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (70.57.138.121) -- Monday, March 13 2006, 03:12 am

passion

Written with feelingsa of such passion for one who's loved very much.

Your writings always evoke emotions one can not dismiss, Thank you friend for sharing the beauty and passion within your soul
jamie (172.198.70.28) -- Monday, March 13 2006, 05:20 pm

He deserves worse

It is true a house not a home. I wish you the best of luck with that one.
Catyrose (128.123.220.224) -- Monday, March 13 2006, 06:27 pm

Thanks Jamie

Couldn't agree w you more. Liked your suggestion for the last line better though :)
 
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