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From One Soul To Another
Author: lam6977

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From one soul to another,
"What's going on with this race?"
Accusing and abusing,
a constant smack in the face

From one soul to another,
"What's wrong with this planet earth?"
Feeling so out of place here,
since the moment of my birth

From one soul to another,
"How can all this be?!"
Money, fame and fortune,
such a "priority"

From one soul to another,
"We were placed here with a path to follow"
Though it does get hard at times,
so many so cold and hollow

From one soul to another,
"There must be something we can do"

Simply look inside yourself & to yourself be true

------- Author's Notes -------

My view of human kind

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Comments on this poem/writing:

MC (64.12.116.5) -- Monday, March 20 2006, 11:31 pm

:)

Good job. I enjoyed reading this. I like your point of view.
xx (64.139.227.36) -- Monday, March 27 2006, 09:40 pm

great i like it

you have a great way of seeing things (ones view of the world is not always the same as the other every one see`s the world as how it treats them
 
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