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Soft
18 March, 2006
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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rose petal touches
soft... delicate...
barely there
a whisper upon my skin

morning dew
kisses upon the grass
intimate passes of the moon and sun
light and dark refract

minute prizms
nearly invisible to eyes
universe of organisation
a ballet of life

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.4.66) -- Saturday, March 18 2006, 03:33 am

Dreamer

This poem is so beautiful, so tender. Thank you for sharing your lovely soul with us!
ShyHeart (4.89.246.161) -- Saturday, March 18 2006, 08:22 pm

Your Heart, Makes Our Soul's and Love Dance

How quiet can a soul be when it loves what it feels inside itself? Your words of quietness, with a sweet caress tell us all, how quiet a soul can be. Worldly and True
Terrie* (66.81.139.139) -- Tuesday, March 21 2006, 02:40 pm

your words are like helium, hearts touch the sky

Awww lovely, just lovely, the title speaks it all, thank you for openin' up our heart's soul and exposin' yours in heavens light ...with a gentle breaths whisper...and a lovin' heart's kiss.. i loved what i felt inside .awwww so soft... the petal of love...
Jeremy Morzos (168.12.253.66) -- Friday, March 24 2006, 05:31 pm

Hi....

Absolutely beautiful!!!!
Britney (70.98.126.152) -- Saturday, April 15 2006, 04:45 pm

Dreamer

pretty very pretty
 
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