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In Place Of You
24 March, 2006
Author: Leah06

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Please don’t ignore me,
And act like I’m not there,
Because these tears that are falling
Show just how much I care
Don’t tell me that it didn’t happen
Stop pushing me away
How can I forget you
When your on my mind each day.
Stop acting I’m invisible
Just an empty space of air
Those times when we kissed
How can you not care?
Stop erasing all those memories
Throwing them away
Don’t tell me I’m your regret
And theres nothing left to say.
I know that lifes not easy
And love is never fair
Replacing you in my heart
Theres a scar burning there.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Catyrose (128.123.220.60) -- Friday, March 24 2006, 09:04 am

heartfelt

This poem touched me in a special way. I could feel the pain in your heart. sorry for your loss.
ShyHeart (4.226.222.201) -- Sunday, March 26 2006, 02:39 am

Love Can Set A Soul Free, Time To Fly

I know, this is your year. What is next, find a job, perhaps Junior College? Leah06, kiss and tell if, it makes you fell better about yourself or, you can face the horizon, feel the strength inside yourself from the sun that shine upon your heart. Leah06, tell me is it time to feel the horizon and its sunshine, or, are you to weak within your self to open up ypur heart to a new world. Leah06, move on to safer harbours that will shelter your heart, let them regret their loss. Love is there for you, I promise you with my own heart, love is in the horizon and the warmth of the sun. Leah06, time you moved on with your heart.
SH (82.16.131.33) -- Friday, March 31 2006, 12:49 am

Touched

This poem has really touched me. Its comforting to know theres someone out there that understands what Im going through. We'll get through this together. Thanx for reading and Ill keep reading yours, so keep writing and keep strong.
Jeremy Morzos (168.12.253.66) -- Sunday, April 2 2006, 07:43 pm

Hey!

This is a defintely a really good way of putting it and about describing love... Thanks enjoyed the read!
Leah06 (67.160.237.11) -- Friday, April 14 2006, 05:46 am

everyone...

I am really glad everyone likes this poem. It was just random and reall frustrating going through this. What hurts you only makes you stronger i guess. So next time, i know not to let a guy have my heart, it doesnt need to be broken again. thanks for sticking by yall.
 
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