Author: Ben Franklin


Could of been one night of waste,
your actions the next morning
left me with a bitter taste.

Your Mum crying down the phone,
lots of thoughts running through my head,
not knowing if her next words were going to tell
me you were dead.

Not knowing the full S.P,
If your coming home or staying overnight,
panic begins to set in,
chest becomes increasingly tight.

Not knowing if you did for attention,
or just so everything would end,
you could of spoke to me,
Im not just your B.F im also your freind.

Remember what I told you in the car?
that your loved by so many people,
to them and me your a beautiful star.

your not ugly and fat,
those insecurities are down to the confidence you lack.

Your a shinning example of what a human being
should be,
and from time to time I become overwhelmed
that someone like you has chosen to be with me.

You more than anyone deserves to be happy,
and trying to make you happy I will keep trying to do,
but remember this is a two way thing,
and the only person who can really make you

------- Author's Notes -------

I love you more then bagels.x


Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive ( -- Monday, March 27 2006, 04:09 am

Great poem

Hey my friend Ben, How are you.? See the words you write still come from that heart you let everyone see. Everyone shines like a star, it takes friends like ou to show them its true. Thanks for sharing
Ben f ( -- Tuesday, March 28 2006, 05:02 pm


was the truth,thank you clive.
Terrie* ( -- Tuesday, March 28 2006, 05:35 pm

result? Contentment when a heart is fully Bless

Ben , my poetic son, sincere is you heart as i know it to be, this was a lovely touch of your heart SOUL-FULLY expressed, be proud of your heart exposed in such a lovely sincere way, blessed is your friend..thank you my Son FOR SHARIN' the deepest part of your heart
Ben f ( -- Tuesday, March 28 2006, 06:21 pm


I love her so much,never ever felt like this before, and the thought of her not here anymore hit me harder than anything I have ever felt. thanks Terrie* for you words.
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