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A Rose That Never Wilts
29 March, 2006
Author: Ing Twi Demalah

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All good things tis said must end
life whether fast or slow passes by the hour
Time with her fiendish teeth seeks all for to devour
Wilting every man and tree and flower

Yet a rose with blue-green eyes
With hair soft as a hatchling’s down
Drives away the loneliness, the heart ache, the frowns
So I take time to see my rose this precious thing I’ve found

And asks my flower still
One very strange question you see
Though confessed by her own lips a friend I be
Why ever are you so kind to me

My rose because of how you make me feel
Giddy and week for surely you must know
For those brief moments in your presence rose
When I am both a coward and a hero

------- Author's Notes -------

Not sure what I was going for, just let the pen write for me. :-)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (66.81.137.220) -- Wednesday, March 29 2006, 10:42 pm

A True Rose , Always A Rose So True...

i love how the touch of Love shine's through you...Ing my friend, as always you never fail us, with the touch of your heart when you apply the completeness of your Passionate soul..good to see your words back in the light...i believe it was more than your pen writin' sweetie, your heart was fully exposin' it's true self, be proud of what you pass onto all hearts that need that touch.....love these words......thank you for sharin' the depth of your soul..
Ing Twi Demalah (159.105.102.6) -- Friday, March 31 2006, 11:43 pm

My Dear Terrie

Thank you for your warm words, you continue to encourage me to post here; to share what can only happen when ones heart is allowed to speak freely. Perhaps it was more than my pen writing this poem. I just so enjoy tking time to stop and smell the roses, the roses in my life however, are rarely flowers. :-)
Terrie* (66.81.137.91) -- Saturday, April 1 2006, 09:26 pm

nurtured and cultivated , opens up many roses

touch the softness of each rose petal that blooms so delicately upon your journey's path in life, inhale and taste their sweet fragrant aroma , UIng ya already know how high maintenanced i am in poetry, i settle for the best nothing less...
 
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