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Love 'n' Feeling
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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With pen to paper I dare to write,
With Pen in hand I know each word,
With Pen I start to think,
If I tell you would you please understand?
If these words come out theyíll be a mess for sure,
If my thoughts open they may scare you away,
Here goes nothing and something of all,
Here Iíll tell you, if youíll listen at all,

If I miss you; itís because you have my heart,
If I want you; itís because you hold my soul,
If I see you; itís because my eyes are yours,
If I hear you; itís because our music still sings,

With your touch Iím alive once more,
Within your voice I hear support in us,
With your heart Iím safe for sure,
With your eyes I see colours so bright,
With who you are I want you more,

As my pen writes these words,
Be sure of them all,
Know I feel for you so much more,
If love was another undiscovered word,
And feelings not yet discovered,
Iíd sit here in total confusion,
Trying to express my feelings 'n'love I have for you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

MC (152.163.100.5) -- Thursday, March 30 2006, 05:50 am

The BEST romantic relationships

are the ones that start over an extended period of friendship. Your words are always so sweet. I'll bet you've heard this a zillion times: "You're a REALLY NICE guy". (The best kind to know) Good luck, Clive. I hope your love is returned. ;)
Clive (70.58.229.46) -- Thursday, March 30 2006, 06:07 am

Too kind

Mc thank you for your all to kind words, my love is felt with every breath she takes.
Catyrose (128.123.221.126) -- Thursday, March 30 2006, 03:15 pm

heart touching

Oh Clive,this is absolutely BEAUTIFUL. With such warmth and tenderness you express. "Here I'll tell you if you'll listen at all". Who could fail to hear, to feel the love you've penned across the page??? These words touched my heart and so many others. Love your words my friend. They never fail to speak to the heart and soul.
Clive (70.58.229.46) -- Thursday, March 30 2006, 03:26 pm

A loving side

Kathy you are as always way too kind, however, I'll take each word and feel Superior if only for this moment.
I'm glad the heart and soul I put into this piece came across in the read.
 
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