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This Pain
5 April, 2006
Author: Ashley J

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I keep all my feelings hidden
Not wanting you to see my pain
The pain you put me through
You make me so confused
Sometimes I just can't handle it all
I wonder what it would be like
If i hadn't ever met you

No matter where I go
No matter what I do
I always think about you

Somedays i'll walk through the rain
Wishing it could wash away the pain
But nothing even helps
I wish you would just leave me be
From you I just want to be free

No matter where I go
No matter what i do
I always think about you

I know I can't hold on much longer
You have stretched me thin
I can't handle it anymore
I just want you to know, before I go

No matter where I go
No matter what I do
I always think about you

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Miztrebor (163.153.64.30) -- Wednesday, April 5 2006, 02:41 pm

Very Good

So you did take out that one line. It may have been good if you incorporated it into the verse right after. But it still is good. you shouldn't be embarassed.
 
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