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Kiss
Author: Bipedalguy

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Though summer's coat of green
is kissed by morning's dew,

Lovers in the grass
are somewhere kissing too.

And though the setting sun
kisses the distant sea,

What matter all these things
If I do not kiss thee?

------- Author's Notes -------

It would seem that there's a lot of kissing going on, but so far, you and I don't seem to be included, so lets give it a go.

By the way Bipedalguy means a guy with two feet. That includes about half of us.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

XOXOXOX (70.88.11.52) -- Wednesday, September 20 2006, 09:14 pm

So....

what are you waiting for? Kiss me already!
Bipedalguy (4.156.24.146) -- Thursday, September 21 2006, 12:12 am

Thanks for the kind offer,

I'm a shy bipedalguy.
XOXOXOX (150.176.200.253) -- Thursday, September 21 2006, 09:06 pm

: (

Sniff! Rejection hurts....but I'll send you a hug anyway! ((((XOX))))
Bipedalguy (4.156.129.46) -- Friday, September 22 2006, 03:36 pm

I needed that.

Hugs'R'Good. Thanks.
XOXOXOX (70.88.11.52) -- Friday, September 22 2006, 05:58 pm

I'm assuming

the X was in the middle, and from experience, I already know you've won. What do you want for a prize? (Thanks for the hug back)
Nicole Ricketts (68.111.145.246) -- Saturday, February 3 2007, 05:13 pm

wow

I love your use of words, this poem really made me smile. thanks
barb (67.58.203.54) -- Saturday, February 3 2007, 05:36 pm

two feet holy lol

Nice write hope you and your hearts dream get together, how could she resist a sensitive 2 footed man.lol
Bipedalguy (4.156.129.159) -- Sunday, February 4 2007, 04:02 am

Thanks, Nicole Ricketts

Thanks for your kind comments. I'm glad I made you smile. This poem was one of my first posts from way back. I can't help wondering how you found it.
Bipedalguy (4.156.129.159) -- Sunday, February 4 2007, 04:20 am

Thanks again, Barb

Glad you liked this one which I wrote some time ago. Even though I have 2 feet (which is good), I must not be very hard to resist. (I don't scare babies, which is a good thing, but I don't seem to scare ladies, and that may not be a good thing) A woman once told me that I don't project any sense of danger. I guess that's a quality that promotes romance. Life is such a mystery.
Renee Berke (66.153.67.232) -- Sunday, August 24 2008, 04:18 pm

Kiss

Absolutely one of my favorites.
Bipedalguy (65.96.237.196) -- Monday, August 25 2008, 01:30 pm

Thanks for the comment, Renee.

Your kind comment on my poem "Kiss" is appreciated. Thanks again. Bipe
 
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