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Eliminating My Enemy
15 May, 2006
Author: Fallen_Angel

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Fading heart beatings and dying breaths
Before the day meets death, the bell rings and the clock ticks.
cry to your "god" let him strangle you break you by the shreds
While life falls to its discontent
Consternation flows deeply from your eyes in the drops tearing
Reflecting your soul that bleeds
The final heart beat
let me hear your screams
laughs that remain echoing
Nostalgically in the flames
framing the haunting memories
Like a snake your teeth
biting into my veins
Let the venom spread and poison the dead
with a knife to my throat
Captured in a bottle is my soul
self elimination

------- Author's Notes -------

This poem is kind of confusing, it's about destroying your enemy some one who brings you down, hurts you, and destroyed all of your chances to happiness. At the end of it all the person who ended up ruining your life was you.

its been about 3 months since i posted.
hope this one isnt that bad :P

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