vinebar

More Than A Friend?
Author: The Lost Girl

vinebar

When I stared into your eyes I was paralyzed
So much so that I could barely think to breath
Now when I touch your hand it feels so cold,
And those eyes I once stared into I begin to loath.

Where were you when I started crying?
Where were you as I layed dying?
Where were you when the searing pain began?
Where were you? I thought you were more than a friend.

When we were together I thought it would always last,
but you proved me wrong, it went so fast.
Now that I think about it you were never there,
and I wonder if you even started to care.

Where were you when I started crying?
Where were you as I layed dying?
Where were you when the searing pain began?
Where were you? I thought you were more than a friend.

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

anonymous (64.12.116.5) -- Monday, June 12 2006, 02:47 am

Loved It

i love this poem, but I'm sorry you were put through that.
December Tears (66.228.226.15) -- Wednesday, June 14 2006, 04:27 pm

__

hey i love this poem -- i can relate very well to it -- in fact i wrote a poem myself similar to this b/c i'm sort of in the middle of that type of situation and yea -- its a long story but keep the writing up
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by The Lost Girl

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.