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How To Impress People
Author: Bipedalguy

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He's a man of great vanity,
but folks hate his S.U.V.
so he drives on hot days
windows up all the way,
so they'll think it's equipped with A.C.

------- Author's Notes -------

Sorry, I've always wanted to write a Limerick, and this is all I could come up with.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Catyrose (71.39.35.38) -- Wednesday, July 5 2006, 08:52 pm

cute

got a smile out of me :)
Bipedalguy (4.156.108.40) -- Friday, July 7 2006, 04:15 am

Thanks, Catyrose

That was my first Limerick.
aleaffalls (75.67.60.210) -- Sunday, December 24 2006, 01:30 am

form

take out the word very in the third line and the work with in the next line and you will be true to form

It's a cute limerick- you should send it in to someone
Bipedalguy (4.156.144.185) -- Sunday, December 24 2006, 02:53 am

You are right

Thanks for the suggestion. It was my first Limerick. I hadn't checked out the rules about rhythm for Limericks prior to writing it. Later I looked up the rules, and found that I could do a lot better if I used the established structure.
If anything, following the rules makes it easier, because these rules go a long way toward the actual creation of the poem.
 
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