Author: Capricorn


You struggled for a lifeline
-- I stretched out,
but a surge delivered you
breathless, floating
like driftwood into mist.

Lost in a sea of suckling mothers,
bereft -- I ache to cradle you
and clutch your blue blanket
against my engorged breasts.

------- Author's Notes -------

For the lady who poured out her heart to me about the baby she lost.


Comments on this poem/writing:

barb ( -- Thursday, July 13 2006, 06:49 pm


This is a touching ,compassionate write.That lady was lucky to have you to talk to.
Mc ( -- Thursday, July 13 2006, 11:03 pm

I second

Barb's comment. You must be earning your wings, Cap. =) Lovely poem.
Capricorn ( -- Monday, July 17 2006, 09:01 am


Barb and MC ~ your comments mean a lot to me
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