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Insanity
Author: Demoinai

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blood... rain...
pooring down upon my face...
in a small corner of my heart i feel pain
but the rest of the dark depths feels sorrow and hate

corpses.. mud...
upon and around my body...
why am i not among the dead?
I, too, a victim of that ebony blade

growling... the darkness...
the wall of calignosity before me...
the future is blind in my eyes
beyond the barrier of lies...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

MiaxElk (72.67.223.213) -- Thursday, August 3 2006, 11:34 pm

Deep.....

*sobs* Demo....... You're so deep!
stray black cat (71.96.230.89) -- Thursday, August 10 2006, 02:59 pm

A bit angest, but good nonetheless

This was well written as well. Though I enjoyed your other poem more, I liked this as well.
 
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