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We Fall Together
16 August, 2006
Author: Everett

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Together we fall
Like leaves on a dying october tree.
I fell so much faster than you.
Breaking apart at the stem.
Broken I watch as you gracefully swing through the air.
I know that you care.
I'll try not to stare
But my eyes are a sucker for such beauty.
I knew you would show your wings.
It won't be long now.
I embrace the sky.
You hold your breath.
In pieces I keep falling...
Falling for you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

MC (205.188.117.65) -- Friday, August 18 2006, 06:37 am

Stunning

this was gorgeous. Keep writing.
Everett (4.176.156.86) -- Friday, August 18 2006, 11:21 pm

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Thank You.
breezy (72.14.73.210) -- Sunday, August 20 2006, 10:23 pm

i love it.

your poem was the best i read on this website it is so good.
Emree (152.163.100.5) -- Monday, August 21 2006, 05:01 am

UHHH

u know who this is.. and if this is about who i think it is.. i love it... i didnt mean to make u hurt enough to write this.. it is soo beautiful!!
everett (4.176.210.30) -- Monday, August 21 2006, 05:11 am

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thank you
LinzAy (72.188.130.173) -- Monday, March 5 2007, 06:47 am

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Hey there Ev. Don't know if you can only pop on every once in a while like me..but this is awesome!
everett (166.128.71.67) -- Monday, January 26 2009, 10:42 pm

thanks...

i havent looked at my old stuff in so long...
 
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