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Gambling The World
Author: Fallen_Angel

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Into the mans ear
the world quietly whispered,
"dear man do you fear?"
"Do you stir at night hiding your self from life that lays in the darkened light?"
"No universe," the man replied,
" I don't dear for existence is fickle like autumn leaves upon a busy street."
"I know you,as soon as the breeze blows at ease
you'll be certain to take my 'dampened life' away from me."
sacastically his words were led
as he gently placed his hands behind his head
But spitefully the world questioned
"Do you quiver in the atmosphere like sand in the wind?
"For you are my prisoner,you're nothing else but the cell in-between the jar I hold...
I guess you would say man I own your soul."
"Yes," he snickered sliding his hand through his hair
"but my soul plays only in a game of cards
and my dear, no matter how much you gamble in your game you'll never win my heart.'

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Phonicpodd (65.70.231.63) -- Wednesday, September 6 2006, 12:51 am

DEEP

WOW!!!!!
scurrd (71.104.142.51) -- Thursday, September 7 2006, 02:52 am

thank you

mallisa, you have been one of my favorite writers since i first found this site two years ago, i remember accidently falling upon angels shower and falling in love with your writings, you have been an inspiration to me and one of my best friends, i think he left you a comment before, lotus i think he posted as, that or white crow, anyways i just wanted to thank you for doing what you do so well, and i hope to be as good of a poet as you one day
Mallisa (69.92.150.22) -- Thursday, September 7 2006, 05:44 pm

aww

awwwwwwww I'm blushing..thank you so much
Lotus (71.104.137.4) -- Thursday, October 19 2006, 05:07 am

Beautiful

wow! im just speachless, your writing is beautiful your ideas are amazing and you have inspired me for so long. you were the first poet i ever fell in love with you inspired me to write how i do, i dont post on this website anymore thats because now i rap, but i still come back all the time to read your work. Thank You you have touched me.........
Dolphin (24.117.24.248) -- Tuesday, December 6 2011, 09:54 am

Amazing!

amazing. nuff said
 
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