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This Is On Me.
Author: Bipedalguy

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In life I was frugal.
Some called me cheap.
Because when the bill came,
Id sit there and weep.

In death, Im more giving,
as the whole world can see.
It's engraved on my headstone,
This is on me

------- Author's Notes -------

What can I say?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Bipedalguy (71.97.27.194) -- Thursday, November 2 2006, 12:34 am

Rick Ryckman

Good humor - appreciate the smile.
Bipedalguy (4.156.51.252) -- Thursday, November 2 2006, 01:48 pm

Thanks Rick

It looks like the guy in the poem came up with a good way to have the last word, and to still look generous. He also saved money on the engraving. (Only 10 letters)
aleaffalls (75.67.60.210) -- Sunday, December 24 2006, 01:16 am

Cute

Very cute. I like it.
Bipedalguy (4.156.144.185) -- Sunday, December 24 2006, 03:00 am

Thanks

I'm glad you like it. I think this is the most attention my writes have ever gotten in one night. I'll have to check out your work.
barb (216.129.12.191) -- Sunday, December 24 2006, 03:09 am

like your writings alot

Always positive humorous words. you should make, bumper stickers and share your talent of funny positive thoughts.
Bipedalguy (4.156.144.185) -- Sunday, December 24 2006, 04:08 am

Thanks Barb

Funniest Bumper sticker I ever saw read simply:

"This is a Bumper Sticker"
barb (216.129.12.191) -- Sunday, December 24 2006, 04:19 am

plain and simple is cute and funny

just like your writings
Terrie* (66.81.130.65) -- Wednesday, January 3 2007, 11:54 pm

Your too much ..

your poetry cain become addictive, soooo much better than a tranquilizer, tastier than ice cream , lets just say , doc has me on rehab, even though laughter kills my back ,i must confess ,love your super sense of humor, a good pain relief..keep that poetry comin'...ya don't want my body to go into shock do ya? lol...
Bipedalguy (4.156.27.140) -- Thursday, January 4 2007, 12:58 am

Thanks again Terrie*

Your comments are very encouraging, because humor (and simplicity) are just what I usually am trying to get into my writes. I have to admit that when something really strikes me funny, like on T.V., I have sometimes had to leave the room for fear that my laughter will overcome me. (to the point of injury)
Terrie* (66.81.129.176) -- Thursday, January 4 2007, 01:47 am

humor the best medicine

i know what you mean, about laughter.i laugh until i'm in tears.thanx for the sweet laughter
 
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