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Quiet
10 October, 2006
Author: Dolphin Chick

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you sit with me
but yet your quiet
you laugh with me
when no one else is around
around my friends
you are quite
around your friends
you smile and laugh
sometimes i wonder
when you sit with me
why are you so quiet

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Ing Twi Demalah (159.105.102.64) -- Wednesday, November 8 2006, 02:37 am

Truly Majestic....

I love this poem, it's simplicity, it's straight forwardness, the way you have captured to awkwardness, the nervousness that often accompanies love. This is so perfectly "Love - Questioning." Please keep writing
 
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