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Kiss Of Death
7 November, 2006
Author: Rick Ryckman

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The shadows are still waging war in my domain.
The darkness surrounds pulling me into the abyss.
Falling into the abstractions of time.
My nightmares come raining down in torrents.
My despair comes dragging a thousand years of agony.
In quiet desperation I am still trying to escape.
From deaths dark fire there is no way out.
The reaper comes relieving me with a touch of his hand.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

MC (152.163.100.5) -- Saturday, November 11 2006, 04:18 am

Rick

I have been reading all the poems that you have submitted this week, and I wanted to say that I really like the honesty that you bring to your emotions. Sounds like you are facing your own mortality and it's beautiful the way you are expressing your darkest fears. The unknown is a frightening thing. The one good thing is, we all have to go through it, so you're not alone. Keep writing. It seems to be therapeutic for you. I enjoy your work.
Rick Ryckman (71.97.28.53) -- Sunday, November 12 2006, 06:44 pm

MC

Truly enjoyed your feedback. Yes my honesty is what has revolved me through my lifetime. Its companion is trust! As for mortality may my epitaph read. Oh gentle fool didn't I know that there were miles to go and a bridge to far to each before I could rest. The unknown is only frightening if you are not will to take the journey. [ SMILE ]

MC ---- I really tried to find your writings. But to no avail did they surrender to me. If you would be kind enough to show me where to go.
MC (205.188.117.65) -- Monday, November 13 2006, 01:54 am

Rick

Honesty and Trust are given and received in unequal measures, most of the time. Life is always a challenging journey. My poetry is listed under Marion Carroll. I always write "MC" as my name, when I am replying to someone's poetry. Keepy writing, Rick. I really enjoy your stuff.
 
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