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Nina, May I Have This Dance
19 November, 2006
Author: Rick Ryckman

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Drifting into my secret garden where dreams are born.
Dancing with the evening's gentle wind.
My sight is blended with the night's canopy.
My eyes are mesmerized upon this ancient landscape.
Kneeling before her billowing fortress of majestic deliverances.
I will surrender my crown.
I will savor her delicious layers.
Her murmurs are sensuous with saturated tones.
I am hypnotized in the splendor of her swaying rhythm.
A rainbow of brilliant colors is hurled into the heavens.
Exploding stars are falling.
Languishing in her warm embrace.
Lying quietly in the tranquility of rapture.
I will waltz across eternity with this night.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Bipedalguy (4.156.51.181) -- Tuesday, November 21 2006, 11:18 pm

Wow

Really deep, but really good. I think I'm starting to understand your skillful and highly stylized technique in artistic analogy.
Rick Ryckman (71.97.24.121) -- Wednesday, November 22 2006, 03:03 am

Bipedalguy

I cannot thank you enough for your kind compliment.
I hope you will continue to read what I write.
Not every one's understanding comes with one grasp.
That is the challenge that nourishes all of our minds.
That is the fascinating journey of the magic carpet that takes flight in our dreams.
fran (152.163.100.5) -- Thursday, December 14 2006, 09:15 am

lucky Nina......to have you

this is sweet.......I know you truly love her
 
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