A Flower Of Blue
There’s nothing I wouldn’t do
to find you a flower of blue.
I’d give you the flower,
and my life, save an hour
To spend that last hour with you.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|barb (188.8.131.52) -- Saturday, December 2 2006, 07:44 pm|
This is so nice and warm ,full of romance with few words. perfect. Most women love to the point statements with romance in them.
|Bipedalguy (184.108.40.206) -- Sunday, December 3 2006, 03:44 am|
Thanks for your kind comment. I've never written much about romance, but that's what I was trying to do this time. I'm told that I'm a hopeless romantic, and at my age I guess there's an element of truth in that, at least the "hopeless" part. L.O.L.
I'm glad you liked it.
|Catyrose (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, December 4 2006, 03:23 am|
I liked it too :)
|Bipedalguy (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, December 4 2006, 11:51 am|
I like that you liked it too. I appreciate your kind comment.
|MC (22.214.171.124) -- Tuesday, December 5 2006, 07:35 pm|
This was totally precious. Very sweet and romantic. Nothing hopeless about being romantic.....truly, romance makes hope spring eternal. Age is a number...you're only as old as you feel. Chronologically, I'm 48 (and a HALF!) In my heart I will always be 18. BTW, delphiniums are a true blue flower. They're just very delicate, and don't last for long!
|Bipedalguy (126.96.36.199) -- Tuesday, December 5 2006, 09:34 pm|
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks re Delphiniums. I guess "Hope, while "wish" is more realistic, is never really gone. At 64 I have all the basic disease groups covered, except I have yet to get a major auto immune disorder. Some say I have 8 lives because I handle my problems (very well?)
My # is 39, and I say that "I know I don't look 39". That must stress the diplomatic skills of the listener. LOL Keep those great poems coming.
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