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Can You See Me Daddy
Author: T'Lonna Robbins

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Its been 4 years now Daddy
Im still missing you
I remember how we were so happy
I know it was because of you

Can you see me Daddy
Im learning how to dance
I sing all the time
Im trying out for American Idol
Hopefully I have a chance
Can you see me

Can you see me Daddy
I write songs and poems too
I express my feelings and thoughts
Things from my heart and soul
Poems and songs about you
Can you see me

Mama says its okay to cry
But i know it makes you sad
I try not to cry
But im hurting really bad
So i let it out
It seemed like the only choice i had
Sometimes i leave the light on
Ill lay there and wait
for you to kiss me good- night
I love you daddy i miss you so much

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Catyrose (128.123.85.206) -- Thursday, December 7 2006, 04:38 am

heart-touching

poem you have written here. I lost my Mom as a young girl and remember feeling much the same way as you have described here. That was years and years ago, but I still write poems about her from time to time. I'm sure your Dad does see you and is very proud of how your express your love for him in your poetry. I look forward to reading more of your poems for they are written from the heart. take care
 
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