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Clouds
Author: Catyrose

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Longing for a sense of relief
I looked outside myself today
Caught a glimpse of the clouds overhead
How peacefully they drift on by

Effortlessly they float above
In the frosty air
Easing themselves through the bluest skies

Pivoting about
Doubling over upon each other
Like children at play

Twisting and turning
In a heavenly dance
Such grace and poise they display

Each new shape
A delight to the imagination
For one can see whatever they wish in a cloud

Wisps that take the form of majestic towers
Filling with precipitation
Perhaps they will burst tonight

Raining down their precious gifts
Blessing the earth with snow flakes quite rare
A wondrous sight that all may share

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (67.58.202.93) -- Friday, December 8 2006, 05:48 pm

now this is a poem

This what I love to read positive grateful writings .If we all look outside ourselves we will see that there is more than just me, Bravo caty excellent writing
T'Lonna Robbins (74.129.184.137) -- Friday, December 8 2006, 08:42 pm

Beautiful

when you write your poems about nature you put so much heart into it. its really pretty
Bipedalguy (4.156.129.154) -- Saturday, December 9 2006, 01:11 am

Well Said

Beautiful write.
I especially like the part about how one can see in the infinite detail of clouds, whatever image fits ones fantasy. That this is true is a credit to the human condition, as well as to the wonder of nature.
Catyrose (128.123.85.206) -- Saturday, December 9 2006, 05:32 am

Thank You All Very Much

for all your kind words and impressions. Not sure which I enjoy more nature or all of your comments. :) Thanks again...
 
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