Raindrops Of Love
Author: Rick Ryckman
In the night she comes from sandcastles of time.
Her silhouette finds the candlelight of my dreams.
Bringing her golden treasures waiting to be found.
I can feel her quivering desires.
Her wings part awakening my senses.
Dance closer to me my love.
Entwined in her rhythm that clings to me.
I will swim in her valley.
To feel the droplets of her waterfalls.
Dawn breaks with memories that lingers.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|MC (22.214.171.124) -- Wednesday, January 3 2007, 05:55 pm|
I LOVE your romance poetry....your words paint vivid images of desire and longing and pleasure. They are truly beautiful. Lucky is the lady who is held in your arms, and loved. =) Mari
|Terrie* (126.96.36.199) -- Wednesday, January 3 2007, 10:20 pm|
if you are the same R.R from International War Veterans ,then sweetie,i must tell you, i have found your work very warm and pleasin' in such a sweet endearin way, im high maintenance to good poetry that speaks with a few chosen words ,i love the silk like appearance you apply to your canvas where we cain see with a naked eye..keep your pen filled with passion, love the way it flows onto the screen..
|frannces Perez (188.8.131.52) -- Thursday, January 4 2007, 11:03 am|
hey rick those are my sentiments excatly......it is one of your most sensual poems......I thhought the comments were on target.....keep writing Rick
|Rick Ryckman (184.108.40.206) -- Friday, January 5 2007, 12:15 am|
Thank you for your very kind words.
From you MC ----
they will always greatfully apprciated.
I am the lucky one who is held in her arms,
|Rick Ryckman (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, January 5 2007, 12:42 am|
Yes - Terrie*
I must admit I am the same R.R. from IWVPA!
I am very, very glad that you have found what I write to be very pleasing.
Your feed back is gratefully appreciated!
Sometimes words can caress other times they can be hammered to the heart like yours are.
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