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A Really Great Knight
Author: Bipedalguy

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Iím a knight. How my armor doth shine.
And my swordís of the latest design.
If you need me, just call.
Pay no mind if I fall,
when saving a damsel so fine.

------- Author's Notes -------

Another Limerick. Any comments?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (72.82.91.207) -- Sunday, December 17 2006, 01:42 am

Yes sir!

I'm-a lovesick poet falling in love with these lovesick limericks! Write another one!

Great aabba lines!
Catyrose (128.123.85.206) -- Sunday, December 17 2006, 12:31 pm

I second that!

Enjoy reading your limericks as well. Especially this one. Perhaps because I'm a bit "sappy" :) Seriously loved the theme. This is by far the best one you've written :)
Bipedalguy (4.156.144.68) -- Sunday, December 17 2006, 01:43 pm

Thanks, Meridian and Catyrose

I'm very pleased to hear that you liked this one. I intended for it to have a little humerous element.(first 2 lines) This Limerick came to me in a flash. It seems that the ones I don't labor over are the best received. Thanks again for your comments.
 
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