Intentions Of The Night
Author: Mental


intentions of the night
the darkness pleaded
forging raindrops that turned red
foresaw what it needed.
moonlight melody
transformed through the night
notes turned violent within my soul
which my memory just can't bite.
midnight wandering
stars that guide my way
feeling lost from the past
long ago from yesterday.


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Rick Ryckman ( -- Wednesday, January 17 2007, 06:44 pm


For a young man these are some very powerful thoughts. I can truly relate to the last four lines. It is a good thing that there will be a lot of tomorrow's for you. Take care on your journey
and don't hug your sorrows to tightly!
Name:                                           Remember Me

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