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Visits
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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V erifying we exist.
I s how we feel when family comes to visit
S howing that they care
I nterested in what you say
T aking time to listen and share

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Catyrose (128.123.85.206) -- Thursday, December 28 2006, 05:52 am

Very nice

I especially liked the first line, wonderful way to describe the importance of family. Most of my family lives a great distance from me, but I felt the way you described through phone calls I have received over the holidays. You did a great job on this as well as the Christmas acrostic. Enjoyed them both very much.
Capricorn (82.46.210.184) -- Saturday, December 30 2006, 10:32 pm

I love it!

Hey Barb -- Daniel would be proud to read this one and your Christmas one. Well done!!
barb (67.58.197.141) -- Sunday, December 31 2006, 04:28 am

learned alot

thanks for the support. These kind of poems are my favorite,When I can think of the words.lol.Yep Daniel taught me alot Cap.
 
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