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Addicted To You
Author: Miztrebor

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Every time that our eyes meet
I canít stand
My knees go weak

Why canít i break this spell
Impossible now
ĎCause i just feel

Head fell back and hit the door
Glass broken
All over the floor

Lying, bleeding, but so happy
Look up to heaven
Itís you i see

Come up for air, to meet your lips
Itís how i felt
With our first kiss

Drifting off into the air
Looking down to you
And your flowing hair

With this you get me high
No need for drugs
To get me by

Youíre the only thing in this world
That rearranges me
Youíre my girl

Iím gonna need another hit
Donít stop now
I donít want to quit

I feel you though my veins today
Youíre so beautiful

And when you quit
I feel alone, so cold
I need a fix

I need you lips
I see your face
Those dirty hips

Dancing, dancing
Around my body
Intrancely still

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 01:10 pm

Comment:

I really like this one...alot but the one thing that buggs me is 'those dirty hips'. It sounds so wrong and ruins the line. I would put 'I see your face' first in that line because having two 'I needs' right after the other sounds funny. But yet another great poem! I really want a book :(
 
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