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Mystical Feelings From Her
Author: Miztrebor

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I found a girl today
I donít even know her name

I saw her sitting on the stairs
She ran her fingers through her hair

It just made me fall
Sown to the ground, a rag doll

She did sumthing amazing
But i donít recall for the life of me

What it was matters not now
She sent me away sumhow

A magical meadow, fields of high
She gave me a new feeling inside

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Comments on this poem/writing:

miztrebor (64.246.153.102) -- Wednesday, January 10 2007, 07:52 pm

Down not Sown

Line sixc starts with Down not Sown, sry :(
Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 01:04 pm

Comment:

Aww its really cute lol! I could see you doing that, being so infatuated with some girl lol!
 
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