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How Could You Leave Her
30 August, 2003
Author: Del

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There's someone waiting just for you,
Somewhere beneath this starry sky.
You left her so very suddenly
She still keeps wondering why.

She thinks of you constantly,
Dreams of you every night.
'Please come back to me,' she begs
And make everything all right.

She remembers all the tender kisses,
On her lips and everywhere.
How could you love her so passionately
And now pretend you just don't care.

She never will forget you,
She never will be free.
I know this so very sincerely.
Because this love sick girl is me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Lady Moon(AKA Enchantress) (206.214.64.203) -- Saturday, October 4 2003, 02:18 am

How beautiful can u get?!.........

I loved this one Del. So passionate, so emotional, and so inspirational to all those secret admirers and secret lovers. Awesome work! Again, I loved it! Keep writing, I'll keep reading!
Tricia (206.230.22.59) -- Saturday, October 4 2003, 05:11 am

sweet poem

Del great poem loved it. Keep up the great great work.
Tricia
Charmaine (165.21.181.210) -- Saturday, October 4 2003, 05:14 am

Beautiful poem

This is so nice..i love it..! Waiting to read more of ur poems..
Ash (65.73.59.235) -- Saturday, October 4 2003, 04:52 pm

Oh Del....

This is an amazing poem. The last line just enhances the poem. I really liked it.
 
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