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Magical Night
Author: Miztrebor

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When i first saw her
The tide was high
The sand was so soft
And oh so white
She looked up at me
With a shine to her eyes

I knew this was real
A start of something i could feel
I knew that this was magic
I knew that this was magic
…in the night

Walking together
Us along the shore
I pulled her in close
Felt my heart soar
We’re spinning high
Dancing above the beach

I knew this was real
A start of something i could feel
I knew that this was magic
I knew that this was magic
…on this night

And we’ll dance together
Just her and i
Underneath the moon
Bather in sweet white
Settling back to earth
Were we both lie

I know that this is real
It all started, this i feel
I know now this is magic
I know now this is magic
…her and i

We’ll
Wait here till dawn
The sand so cold
The air starting to warm
The sun will start rising
As a new Love is born

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Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 12:58 pm

Comment:

Thats really sweet, I bet it would sound even better if you were singing it, but reading it you dont have to repeat the lines twice because its repeated throughout the poem. I liked it though, I bet if you gave that to a girl she would cry ;)
 
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