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Aware
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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To be fully aware
being able to share.

When in a dream state,
Loved ones think it is our fate.

We can hear the prayers and pleas,
But can't do anything to please.

Frustrating not able to take away the pain.
Rewarding to here that we are wanted to remain.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (66.81.128.45) -- Friday, January 12 2007, 03:48 am

this is absolutely BEAUTIFUL !!

Hi Barb, i always look forward in takin' time out from my every day life to take a peek at the Inspirin' words of knowledge/Wisdom you Bless this site with,You are truely an amazin' woman . thank you for these words...almost like stoppin' to smell the fragrance of life (ROSES)
barb (67.58.207.70) -- Friday, January 12 2007, 04:24 am

thanks Terrie

I'm glad you enjoy reading my minds thoughts hope others do too.
Catyrose (128.123.85.206) -- Friday, January 12 2007, 07:03 am

Inspiring

Barb, maybe it's just my interpretation, but i can sense the frustration in this piece, yet you've ended it on a positive note, filled with gratitude. And inspiring write. Thanks for sharing.
barb (67.58.197.231) -- Friday, January 12 2007, 03:38 pm

good intuition caty

yea wanting to help stop the pain but makes you feel good that they care.So mixed feelings when in a comma. lol
 
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