vinebar

Winter's Bed
Author: Capricorn

vinebar

Winter dawns as snowflakes
spill from yawning skies
like delicate lace doilies
drifting down
to blanket
the earthís grassy mattress
in a flurry of shimmering sheets.

The temperature tumbles,
scattering frosted spangles,
to glisten the quilt
pillowing terra firma,
for Winterís quiescence.

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (67.58.205.188) -- Sunday, January 14 2007, 05:31 pm

sounds nice

gee cap after reading this snow is pretty. I won't hate seeing it come now.lol
barb (67.58.205.188) -- Sunday, January 14 2007, 05:33 pm

oh yeah

good description. Love your eye for details .
Meri (71.253.222.228) -- Monday, January 15 2007, 05:02 am

I wish I had a winter white Christmas

Darn. We didn't get any snow. We haven't gotten any in four years. You describe the winter's bed so uniquely in your writing that I can see a picture for me...

To bad it was only a picture...lol
I want the real thing...
But then again, I thank God we haven't been having any snow now that I think about it. Because the teenagers where I live don't know what it means to respect other's property. The trample over your yard, dirty boot prints and all...until the snow is no longer nice and level...

But, enough of my jabbering. Wonderful poem!
Meri (71.253.222.228) -- Monday, January 15 2007, 05:04 am

I'm sorry

For line three I meant...
"a picture in front of me"

For line four, I meant
"too bad"

I'm always thinking something and typing something else...lol
Capricorn (82.46.210.184) -- Tuesday, January 16 2007, 12:11 am

Thanks!

Thank you Barb and Meri. We don't seem to get snow here in UK now either. It's nice to see it at Xmas -- but I hate it when it gets dirty and slippery.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Capricorn

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.