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My Love, I Fell Apart
23 January, 2007
Author: Tammy

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The day you left this world
my love, I fell apart.
I couldn't handle the pain
that wrapped around my heart.

I cried so many tears
as my life went out of control.
When they laid you in the ground
I just couldn't let you go.

I couldn't face the truth
that God needed you more then I.
How could he take you from me?
why did you have to die?

So many questions I asked him
with such anger in my heart.
The day God took you from me
my love, I fell apart.

I couldn't understand
the way things had to be.
I couldn't understand
why he took you away from me.

I tried so hard to understand
but anger was all I knew.
He took you away from me
and there was nothing I could do.

I couldn't bring you back
back to me, and our son.
I couldn't make things right
my life just came undone.

The day you left this world
my love, I fell apart.
And I still carry the pain
wrapped around my heart.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (66.81.130.140) -- Tuesday, January 23 2007, 06:57 pm

even Morphine caint take that pain away...

i feel your loss..difficult to let go of that perfect love, when you still feel the love of a Ghost..great write Tammy..
Tammy (64.57.162.181) -- Wednesday, January 24 2007, 06:30 pm

Thank You

Terrie*, My friend...once again thank you for all the kindness, and the comfort you send in your comments.
Catyrose (128.123.85.206) -- Thursday, January 25 2007, 05:47 am

Words that go straight to the heart

This poem brought tears to my eyes. I am so sorry for your loss. Words fail me. I have a friend who has recently been through what you describe here. Would you mind very much if I shared it with her? It
Tammy (64.57.160.208) -- Thursday, January 25 2007, 02:20 pm

Catyrose

Thank you for commenting, and reading. I don't mind at all you sharing this with your friend. My heart goes out to her, and my prayers are with her, and her family.
 
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