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Waterfront Limited
1 February, 2007
Author: Bipedalguy

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It's important that I come to grips
that I'll never go on ocean trips.
I'm no cook nor tailor.
I am a Swiss sailor,
in a land that's without any ships.

------- Author's Notes -------

Ever meet a Swiss sailor?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (67.58.204.60) -- Thursday, February 1 2007, 05:25 am

cute one

Good one Popeye lol I got a good chuckle you even got rhymes in there.
shan (65.29.54.133) -- Friday, February 2 2007, 03:02 am

:-D

haha!! enjoyed the laugh! i'm seconding barb..
:-) cute one!!! lol
Terrie* (66.81.128.237) -- Tuesday, February 6 2007, 05:51 am

Cute ! always worth the tickle

Great one Bip...an ocean man? Alright! hmmm you must've hit shore where house-boats and Yachts have taken control.. i sense the passion of navigatin' to see life from the deep blue sea , nothin' like takin' on the waters with the winds breeze upon the sails..i have this cool ship that sits proudly on my shelf..a swiss sailor eh?
Bipedalguy (4.156.108.135) -- Saturday, February 10 2007, 01:31 am

Thanks, Barb, Shan, and Terrie*

I seem to have taken a while before finding your kind words re "Waterfront Limited". It didn't come out quite as I wanted it, but it has 5 lines, so I went with it. Thanks again, Bip
 
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