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An Aching Heart
Author: Del

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What can you do for an aching heart?
I really wish I knew.
Neither a doctor or a dentist
Can offer comfort for you.

The pain it inflicts is a steady pain,
It just doesn't go away,
You feel it in the morning when you awake
And it stays with you all day.

You talk to your heart and tell it,
Stop! this is no good at all,
But it's like a turbulent river
Going over a water fall.

There is no way to stop the hurting,
Except maybe, with a prayer or two.
God may be able to stop the pain,
And help you see this thru.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (63.208.60.160) -- Saturday, September 13 2003, 08:05 pm

Enjoyed this poem, beyond my reply ability, too good.

Del,

I enjoyed this poem very, much. Its simple and to the point. It so good, I can't touch it with any reply, except, it a super poem and offers heavenly advice.

MartinV
Megan (205.188.208.70) -- Sunday, September 14 2003, 05:42 am

*Untitled*

I like it. Its something that almost everybody feels at one time or another so its really easy to relate to.
-Megan-
Terrie* (65.148.208.138) -- Sunday, September 14 2003, 09:25 pm

TOUCHED........

Del, Extremely...Beautiful..... your absolutely correct .....Prayer will definently see you thru....... A M E N!!!!!
Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 04:13 am

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I think its so weird that you can literally have a hurting heart! When ppl say oh you hurt my feelings well one day I found out it was true my mom said something really horrible to me and I felt a little pain pierce my heart and from that day on I knew to be careful with ppl's hearts cuz you'll never know whos your gonna break!
KJP (67.112.79.23) -- Saturday, January 31 2004, 06:57 am

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Its true no matter how much you want it to go away it won't. The only thing you can do is pray. Very nice.
 
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