Long Shadows by Pondering Red

Yesterday...
so far away.
One minute flows into another.
Sun shadows flow into
the lightness of dusk into
the city darkness of lamplights.

Full moon over the tall buildings-
Moon so small -
Cracks in the sidewalk so long -
Nightime shadows stretch
halfway down the street.

Noone walks by.
Sleepy city -
I hear my footsteps
walking into tomorrow ....

barb (216.129.12.189) -- Tuesday, February 6 2007, 05:23 am

good stuff
Your writing was so descriptive. I felt like I was on a dark street walking. It meant something different to you, but I enjoyed interperting it my way. Thanks for a nice peaceful read.

Meridian (71.241.31.244) -- Tuesday, February 6 2007, 05:33 am

nice vision
It's good to imagine such tranquility. I don't know what we would do without our dreams and imagination...our creative side wouldn't emerge as much. But I agree with Lady B, this was so real... Enjoyed your poem P.R.!

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