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And It Did Hurt
Author: Scorpio

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I never said
I didn't believe you
It's simply that
It wouldn't be
The first time it happened
Has it ever been known
That by hurting so much
You could never again
Realize just how much
You actually hurt
I feel that
I know how much it hurts
But I can't experience it
I never said
I didn't believe you
But you gave me
The total truth
When you walked away

------- Author's Notes -------

Just a simple free-verse. Comments aren't important, just read it.

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Cancer - male (71.198.238.191) -- Saturday, September 18 2010, 09:59 pm

And it did hurt - comment

This is a very deep poem Scorpio - shows an insight to a truth and much more. Very inpiring and an insight to a Scorpio's emotional depth and heart.
Meridian (205.188.116.135) -- Monday, September 20 2010, 03:16 am

I agree

This poem is deep Scorpio. Three years later and clicking into it again, makes the poem read as though you just wrote it.

You're probably in college by now. I wonder if your major is English or emphasis is Creative Writing.

Profound, as usual.
 
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