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Questioning Love
Author: Leah06

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Why is it hard to love me
I know you say you do
But actions speak louder than words
Can't you show me too?
I want to fall asleep in your arms
Melt within your kiss
Look into your eyes
Show my life what it is I miss.
Why can't we be happy
Why can't this be real
Why do we have to write
Instead of show what it is we feel.
Why do you make promises
Knowing I soak in it all
For once cant you be the one
Who takes the ultimate fall.
This fantasy this feeling
To be in L-O-V-E
It may just be a word to you
But it's the world to me.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (66.81.129.224) -- Monday, February 12 2007, 12:34 am

Deep

Leah06, this is heavy, great words and so true , to the world you are ONE person, to one person you are the WORLD when you are in love... keep writin' Hun..you have great talent ...
EARL (68.40.31.122) -- Monday, February 12 2007, 05:26 am

L-O-V-E IS SO......

Your poem gave me chills- Your L-O-V-E is so beautiful in her progression.
Leah06 (137.150.199.165) -- Monday, February 12 2007, 05:48 am

Terrie* and EARL...

To both of you, thank you so much. Your comments truly mean a lot to me. I havent written in a very long time and i though i lost touch. And then i wrote this. So thank you very much for reading.
With L-O-V-E,
shan (65.29.54.133) -- Monday, February 12 2007, 07:50 am

beautiful!!

your writing is a god given talent girl, no matter how long we go without expressing it... it's always within you... you have a beautiful heart, and you express it so well!!! HERE'S TO L.O.V.E
ps, i'm glad your posting again!!! :-)
thanks for the read~!! very beautiful!!!
Leah06 (137.150.199.165) -- Monday, February 12 2007, 08:57 am

shan

Thank you very very much shan. im glad you enjoyed it so much. im really glad im writing again too, i hope i can keep it up because i feel im all backed up inside with tons of thoughts that have no where to go. i hope you keep reading. it will give me a bigger drive to keep writing and posting.
shan (65.29.54.133) -- Monday, February 12 2007, 04:15 pm

leah :0)

ya know..
them's the times i find i write the best,
when i'm all full up and can't say much less, there's nothing like getting it all off your chest
let it fall off, and let the pen do the rest
(or fingers typing) whatever.. lol i look forward to mooore! keep ya chin up
much L O V E
Meridian (64.12.116.142) -- Thursday, February 15 2007, 04:18 am

welcome back Leah

Glad to see a poem from you again also Leah06! It's almost like an internet family reunion for those that haven't posted anything for awhile and come back to home sweet home...(Dreamer's)...

Great title! Awesome questions!
 
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