Points Of View
8 March, 2007
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)
I get happy, I get sad
I have good days, I have bad
I sometimes say things I shouldn't say
There are times I want everything to just go away
I'm not perfect as you think I am
Sometimes I wish I looked like them
I write, I cry and wonder why
Other times I think, why even try
I work all day to make ends meet
I come home clean, then sleep and repeat
I still ask myself where I fit in
No matter how hard I try, I don't always win
Underneath I'm not who I seem
I sometimes suffer from low self-esteem
I know it's all just a point of view
But perhaps underneath I'm just like you
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Robert (69.229.118.151) -- Saturday, March 10 2007, 05:35 pm Nicely done Dreamer. I liked this writing. Thanks for sharing. |
| barb (67.58.202.69) -- Saturday, March 10 2007, 06:13 pm good write I liked. |
| Bipedalguy (4.156.108.101) -- Saturday, March 10 2007, 07:41 pm It's a beautifully expressed message. I love the last line and believe that it's true for most of us. |
| shan (65.29.55.47) -- Monday, March 12 2007, 10:30 am are you a mind reader?? i loved this one! you spoke my thoughts and feelings out here... :-D and brought my self esteem higher than its been all week. wait, the week just started.. but anyway, good way to kick it off.. beautiful write, girl... beautiful |
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