You Want The Truth?
Author: Scorpio


You make me feel so dark
My hopes leave me so light
And I always seem to wonder
What I'm doing that isn't right

I keep hoping and praying
For each day we get to share
But there always seems to be
Part of you that isn't there

What am I doing wrong?
For you, I would change it all
If ever you needed my love
You could always give me a call

Sometimes it seems to me
That I'm not the one on your mind
I wish I could take your pain
But towards me, it seems you're blind

I could never stop loving you
Even if you might ever try
But you'll always be in my heart
Until the very day that I die

------- Author's Notes -------

...For him... I wish he would love me like he says he does...


Comments on this poem/writing:

dija ( -- Monday, January 7 2008, 08:44 pm

whats love?

i've lived my life in my own personal little hell, im shy, and poetys my only excape, sometimes i wonder if ill ever fall inlove, ive tryed so hard to lock my emotions up that i dont understand them, you seem to get it, to understand, wish i had that talent, greatpoem.
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