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Thief
Author: Scorpio

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You stole it from under me
And I never even knew
Just how much I always
Thought of me and you

You took it from its place
And I can't get it back
But I'd rather live in misery
Than the feelings I would lack

You broke me into two
And left me here to drown
Don't you know without you
I can't help but feel so down?

You crushed my happiness
Without a peace of mind
I wish you would be honest
Instead of leaving me behind

Why won't you let me in?
When I opened up for you
Bastard broke my heart
And I don't know what to do

------- Author's Notes -------

No, this isn't broken relationships... Even if you're in one, you can still get your heart broken.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Catyrose (128.123.85.206) -- Tuesday, March 27 2007, 07:10 am

You certainly can!

I can really relate to this poem. Have been in relationships where the other person is physically but not emotionally there. Alot more painful than being alone. A very hopeless feeling. Don't know if I'm way off base, but this was my interpretation. Left an impact on this reader.
 
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