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Scorpio
Author: Catyrose

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As I walk along the sandy beach
The waves lap against the shore
The water tonight is crystal clear
I can see down, down, down
To the oceanís floor

For I am but a water sign
I plunge to the depths from time to time

A chill overtakes me as the icy water
Caresses the soles of my feet
All at once I find myself adrift
The tide rises
It carries me along
Removing me once and for all
From a place I never belonged

After so many years of trying
Of wishing and hoping for a dream to be realized
I succumb to the truth
Daring to open these eyes
I glimpse reality for one painful moment in time

As the tide pulls me further and further from the shore
A sense of relief washes over my soul
Iíll let the tide of tears propel me along
Until I have been healed and once again made strong

For I am but a water sign
I plunge to the depths from time to time

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Bipedalguy (4.156.144.160) -- Friday, March 9 2007, 11:35 pm

Sad, but touching

I'm not much of an astrologer, but I'm a Scorpio, and I believe, a watersign. I sometimes find myself in the dumpster. If I look around, I tend to get out of their fairly soon.
I find this excellent poem to be very creative.
Catyrose (128.123.85.206) -- Sunday, March 11 2007, 01:09 am

Thanks Bip

Good advice. You're right, I do get down, but I don't allow myself to stay there too long. Often times I write to get in touch with my feelings so I can move out of the blue mood I might be in.
Meridian (151.199.134.18) -- Thursday, March 15 2007, 01:49 am

A Scorpio

Scorpio's seem like nice people. As much as I want to believe in the zodiac signs, I can't pull myself to it. The personalities and characteristics aren't always true with some folk.

But scorpio's seem nice. Me? I'm a ram. I guess I'm mean. Only when provoked, do I show my horns. Laugh out loud.

Beautiful poem though Catyrose!
Catyrose (128.123.85.206) -- Thursday, March 15 2007, 04:22 pm

Thanks Meri

I'm not really into the Zodiac all that much. Just seemed to fit with the mood I was in at the time.
Thanks for reading and your comments.
Scorpio (71.201.5.230) -- Monday, March 26 2007, 06:15 pm

Touching

I really like this. I can't say for other scorpios, even more-so ones that know more into their signs; however, it's very emotional and truthful.

Very nice! (=
shiloh (66.24.112.118) -- Tuesday, December 18 2007, 08:52 am

good description of your mood

we all plunge to the depths, and sometimes it is tempting to stay there -

can you tell me how it went with my poem you borrowed to use in your classes?

peace...
 
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