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True Beauty
27 June, 2007
Author: Miztrebor

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One may see a million faces,
A million beautiful bodies,
All in a lifetime.
But these sights are not full truths,
Not revealing of what beauty is.
Physical appearances may suit sum,
The shallow and ill-hearted ones,
They shall not know true elegance.

The inner sanctum, the soul,
Of a woman is what must be attainted.
Only then shall a man’s heart
Grant him the ability,
And feelings, capable to Love her.

There after,
Shall the man be able to feel,
Be able to cry aloud
And sing.

He has found his symphony,
Found his peaceful palace:

In her heart.

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Pondering Red (65.94.87.94) -- Thursday, June 28 2007, 04:10 pm

yes

Yes, wisdon and true soulful insight in your beautiful poem.

One can also say, " She has found her symphony,
Found her peaceful palace:

In his heart."
Miz Trebor (64.246.153.61) -- Thursday, June 28 2007, 04:48 pm

indeed

This can be changed around to relate to anyone's sex and preference. Thank you for bringing that up.
Princess Moon (12.73.58.188) -- Wednesday, July 4 2007, 09:52 pm

oh my.....

I really like this one, Mitzrebor...it shows the passion a mans heart should possess for a woman so romantically and authentically...awesome job in describing it!
 
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