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End Of The World
Author: L'Rathi

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As we march into the desert,
Flocking to oblivion-
As the heat pounds down,
Searing burnt skin-
But I lose my train of though.
As we watch the sky boil,
And I dissolve into a whiff of gas-
As the stars melt,
And the world screams-
But I digress.

As the world ends…

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RinRin (69.133.136.143) -- Wednesday, July 18 2007, 01:25 am

Wow..

I like this one! I love the last few lines, especially "As the stars melt, and the world screams". Very good imagery, and it sure opens up a world of questions and ideas! Good job :)

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